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83. Change In The Weather by ~DannyPhantom66:iconDannyPhantom66:



I knew you were coming
By the change in the weather
The uneven sense
When one enters a world
He doesn’t belong.

I could feel the chains pulling
At our separating lines
As you crossed the invisible barrier
Frail fate dancing in the air
Begging for separate sides
You and I are always crossing.

I felt your soul shutter
Into a life not its own
As you felt my pulse deepen
At your presence so cold,
That always causes
A pleasant disruption.

Your change in the weather
Is brought about with cold rain
Only as time looms on
A blazing moon follows through
The clear skies signaling your leave.
:icondannyphantom66:

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For the 100 theme writing contest (can be viewed in my journal)

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:iconsomeone-to-remember:
I've been trying so hard to work on this one. I have a feeling my first stanza is going to sound a lot like yours, but I'll probably take it a differnt way.

<3

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Anything that makes you happy is worth the fight; just as long as you're smart enough to know when something sweet has turned sour.
I'm pretty sick of biting into rotten fruit.

[[i am through]]
:icondannyphantom66:
lol xD Im having issues with a lot of these darn things =P

Im sure a lot of people took that approach for it... or would xD But, oh well.



Thanks

<3 Nickel

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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UlquiorraxYoruichi <3

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