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Anime is a sheet of ice
You stare at it in awe…
Then you slip on it,
Unable to escape once you are down

Even when it hurts to fall
Into its trap
You cannot help but to stare
At its sparkling beauty.

It is cold in the fact
That it closes out life
Making it so your eyes
Can only see its glittering appeal

It holds tranquil elegance as you stare
Holding you in mystifying silence
Until you begin to enter further
And it cracks beneath your feet

Jagged edges penetrate into your soul
Clenching you until you cannot breathe
Yes – this is the feeling of a fangirl moment approaching
It grasps you in an icy haze as you remain unmoved.

No matter how much you slip
On the icy floor it creates
You admire it
In all its mystical magnificence.
:icondannyphantom66:

Author's Comments

Uhhm, yeah xD Had to do a metaphor for a workshop:

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And, since I had to write it pretty fast... I just picked the first thing that came to mind xD

And yes, I am a dork D: Sorry.

xD

I am looking for critique, even though this was kind of silly xD

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:iconstarbucks-kun:
1.your name is awesome
2. this poem is awesome

:D

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:meow::skull::meow::skull::meow::skull::meow:
Y SO SRS KITTY?:kitty:
:icondannyphantom66:
lol, thanks much =D

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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IchigoxRukia
UlquiorraxYoruichi <3
:iconstarbucks-kun:
your very welcome :3

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:meow::skull::meow::skull::meow::skull::meow:
Y SO SRS KITTY?:kitty:
:icontarny:
*walks in*

ROFLL XD

*walks off showing thumbs up*
:icondannyphantom66:
lmao Tarn xD

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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IchigoxRukia
UlquiorraxYoruichi <3
:iconicy-moon-shadow:
LOL.

So true xD I got totally sucked into InuYasha, for example. After mentioning it to a friend of mine, she went home and watched up to season 5 in a week. She then told her brother, who slurped down 2 seasons in one night.
:icondannyphantom66:
Haha, Inuyasha started it all for me xD

Then I moved onto Bleach and that's been my obsession for probably three years xD

Thanks =D

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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IchigoxRukia
UlquiorraxYoruichi <3
:iconicy-moon-shadow:
Hmm, Bleach, I've actually never heard of that :P (I've seen InuYasha, and now I'm on episode 69 = season 3, but the other only anime I've really watched is Ranma 1/2. I bore with it for a few episodes but I found it kinda annoying.) I'm trying to find another really good anime, one that's funny, cute, but also has some action (like InuYasha.) Is Bleach like that?
:icondannyphantom66:
I like bleach a lot more than Inuyasha, and I loved Inuyasha. It's got a lot of action, but it's not overdone. I dont like action much, yet it doesn't bother me at all xD

And yes, it does have its funny moments xD

Ive watched Inuyasha, Bleach, Death Note, Black Cat & Ouran High school Host Club.

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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IchigoxRukia
UlquiorraxYoruichi <3

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