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There is something about your cold embrace
Along with the sorrow behind your eyes
And the mix of emotions on your face.

I don’t know how we got into this place
Secrecy and the claim of hidden lies
There is something about your cold embrace.

I can no longer stand your musing grace
With the way you watch me with cold demise
And the mix of emotions on your face.

I cannot compromise what caused this space
All I want is to replace the worn ties
There is something about your cold embrace.

We can pretend we are in perfect pace
With a fake scene as our broken disguise
And the mix of emotions on your face.

I wish we could have that same interlace
If we could possibly apologize.
There is something about your cold embrace
And the mix of emotions on your face.
:icondannyphantom66:

Author's Comments

Mk, this took approx. 40 minutes? Yeah, my rhyming stinks, so it took forever xD

Anyway, this was a pain... but I think it turned out alright. Though, my repeating lines dont always make sense throughout it o.O Oh well..

Thanks for reading.

This was done for the 100 theme writing contest that can be viewed in my journal.

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:iconsomeone-to-remember:
I like the rhyme scheme/rhythm in this one. Very well written!! <3

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Anything that makes you happy is worth the fight; just as long as you're smart enough to know when something sweet has turned sour.
I'm pretty sick of biting into rotten fruit.

[[i am through]]

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