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Rejection echoes
Across my soul,
Ever since the day,
You stole away far from home,
Promising you won’t remember me.

Hurt echoes
Throughout my life,
Ever since the day,
You declined my offer
To be your wife.

Betrayal echoes
Between each new relationship
I try to endure,
However, they all bring back tearful memories,
Of your demure.

Memories echo
Hurt and pain
As I realize
There is nothing to gain
From dwelling on the past
Now listen to
My echoed laugh
As I become that someone, you wanted,
However, your offer has long since passed,
You are no longer permitted
To be a part of my life.
:icondannyphantom66:

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randomness.


Done for the 100 theme writing contest. (can be viewed in my journal)

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:iconprincess-silver:
Wow!!! The anger is practically touchable! :O
From a person that didn't actually go throught the experience
This is nothing but amazing! :D


I feel defeated -___-
Joking :P

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Not here, Not now, But somehow, I promise...
:icondannyphantom66:
Thanks =D

I can hope I dont go through that type of experience, anyway xD

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The moon shone so bright that night I saw him standing there, green eyes looking back into mine. His glance so perfect, so serene. I found myself staring into a dream.

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IchigoxRukia
UlquiorraxYoruichi <3

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